here is a quick view I learned that to use descriptive writing
Cameron/August Brainstorm
As the sun rose
Who - 33-year-old farmer, dog, great aunt.
What - the sun rose,
nerves because of the first day on the job.
the aftermath of a disaster.
knowing that a huge storm is approaching.
anger knowing that the cows got out.
Emotionally knowing that his aunt is in hospital.
getting nervous
When - very early in the morning.
As the sun rose a big black mist of cloud approaching heading straight to the farm as he walked back inside as he walks past the kettle flicking it on. He takes to steps outside onto the deck he looks at the dark mist of clouds.
As it the first day on the job and no one to help bunker down the farm form the storm. I have to do all of it before sunset there was still a lot of things to fix even when the.
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